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23 August 2008 @ 02:56 pm
Wish Note Chapter 1  

Title: Wish Note
Length:
chaptered?
Author: [info]iheartuknow
Rating: PG-13 for now

Genre: mystery, supernatural, drama, romance, slight angst, magic, humor, ect.
Pairings: YunJae/JaeHo main
Summary: by chance, Jaejoong possessed a little purple book, it was supposed to grant his wishes however not every wish.  More over, where was ‘Love Note’? Who became its owner? Things got complicated when another boy appeared in his school.  Who was he and what did he want? (inspired by Death Note anime, the plot is not the same.)

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of them, but they own my heart! <3
Warning:
Not beta-ed… please pardon my mistakes! ^^

 


 

            “Hahahahahaha, L you lose! This is the end for you, finally it is my victory! Hahahahahhaha!!!!!”

 

            “Jaejoong, get away from me, you are insane!”

 

            In the same classroom, a boy laughed hysterically while another boy rubbed his forehead and sighed.  He tried his best to look normal to other students who watched suspiciously, but in vain, the other boy is not making it easy for him.

 

            “Jaejoong hyung, you are not Light and I am not L, stop it!!!”

 

            Ever since the manga Death Note came on, Jaejoong had been obsessed.  He used all his money to purchase all volumes of the manga, all episodes of the anime and even the movie.  His planner became Death Note planner, his calendar became Light theme calendar, his pajama became Ryuk Shinigami pajama and the worst of all, he kept thinking that he’s Light.

 

            “L, this is your end!!! Prepare for death!!!!” Jaejoong yelled loudly and pointed his finger at Yoochun who sat next to him. 

 

            Yoochun grunted, “Right right, kill me, let this end! I can’t take it anymore.  You win okay, Jaejoong! You win!” Yoochun dropped his body onto the table, pretending his death.

 

            “Ohhhh yeah! I win!” Jaejoong jumped from his seat, “Yoochun, let’s play again, let’s do the last scene where L died in front of Light, oh that was like so cool! Hahahaha” loud giggles could be heard even from outside of the room, however only one person was really tortured. 

 

            “AHHHHH!!! I hate Death Note, stop this… I’m going insane!!!”

 

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            After school, Jaejoong walked into a shop that sold only Death Note possessions.  Though Jaejoong already had every object in the shop, it had been a habit to visit here after school. 

 

            “Maybe they have new things today! Ahh, I must go instantly!” Jaejoong ran into the shop and looked around.  To his disappointment, he found nothing new.  He sighed, feeling a bit empty and with one last look, he started to walk outside. 

 

            “Wait, come here! I have something for you!” Jaejoong stopped walking and searched for the voice.  Not long, he saw the owner of the shop gesturing him to come close.

 

            “Me?” Jaejoong pointed at himself asking the owner.

 

            “Yes you!” the owner nodded and waved at him.

 

            “O-kay!” Jaejoong shrugged to himself and walked forward, “What’s the matter?” he asked as he reached the man.

 

            “I have a little notebook for you, this is part of the Death Note collection.” Said the owner, while he took out a little purple book, on the cover of the book, it had the words “Wish Note”.

 

            “Wish Note?” Jaejoong said questioningly, “shouldn’t it be ‘Death Note’?”

 

            “Ahhh, ‘Death Note’ is nothing new nowadays, however ‘Wish Note’ is quite special, it’s the twin of ‘Death Note’, a much nicer twin!” the man said with a deeper voice.

 

            “Excuse me? A twin? How come it’s not in Death Note, I’ve never heard of it!”

 

            “That’s right.  Death Note had two siblings, one is ‘Wish Note’ and the other is ‘Love Note’.  Death Note is the one that kills people, Wish Note is much subtle, it grants every wish, while Love Note makes people fall in love.”

 

            “Wow! That’s amazing! Do you have ‘Love Note’ as well?” Jaejoong asked with his eyes sparkling.

 

            “Unfortunately I no longer possess ‘Love Note’, someone was here earlier and he had already became the own of that book.” The owner looked at his hands and examined it carefully, “perhaps I pretended I had no idea…” he shook his head, seemingly in his own mind.

 

            “Err… is something wrong?” Jaejoong asked after waiting for the owner to start again but the owner had been quiet.

 

            “Oh, I apologize for that.  Well, do you wish to have this ‘Wish Note’? If you do not wish to own it, I will wait for the next person; however if you do wish to possess this book, you must learn how to use it on your own.  Unlike Death Note, there is no clear direction on how to use this book; also unlike Death Note, this is the only copy of this book.  If you wish to have it, you will be the only one using this book.” The man explained carefully, watching Jaejoong’s bemused expressions. 

 

            “I… if I thought right, this book will grant every wish I wrote in here?”

 

            “Yes and no, if this is the twin of Death Note, it should hold the same power; however, no one has used it in the past, no one can be sure.  You must learn how to use it on your own.”

 

            “I see… are you sure you want to give this book to me? I mean what if I’m a bad person and my wishes are selfish ones and…”

 

            “How you use the book is your choice once it become yours.  I have no intension in knowing nor worrying what you do.  You can pass it on to others once you no longer wish to have it, no matter what you decide to do; it is simply your choice.”

 

            “I… can I have this book? I…”

 

            “Yes, if that’s your choice, please write your name on the first page of the book and the book will be yours.”

 

            Slowly the owner handed Jaejoong the purple book, he then handed Jaejoong a pen.  Jaejoong opened the book carefully and wrote his name on the very first page.  And then… he was standing outside of the shop…

 

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            “How strange…” Jaejoong muttered to himself and looked at the purple book still lying on his palm.  If it was a dream, then how would he explain the little book? But would this little book grant all of his wishes?

 

            Jaejoong pondered while walked to the bus stop.  Maybe he ought to try it when he got home today.  Yes, that’s it.  If it was a joke then there was nothing to wish for. 

 

            The bus arrived and people rushed onto the bus.  Jaejoong walked to the end door and stood aside.  He could hardly pay any attention to his surrounding since the book had occupied his mind completely. 

 

            Suddenly the bus came to a halt and the end door opened unexpectedly.  People started rushing down the bus before Jaejoong had gained his balance, with a strong force he felt his body starting to fall out of the bus. 

 

            “Ahhh” he yelled and waved his arms franticly, asking for help.  More people rushed to the door; Jaejoong closed his eyes waiting for the fall… but after waiting forever, after the bus had became quiet again, pain still did not welcome him. 

 

            Slowly Jaejoong opened his eyes; a handsome face appeared in front of him.  He was laying in the arms of another boy, a boy of his age who had a gorgeous smile. 

 

            “Are you alright?” the boy asked him gently, a soothing voice greeted Jaejoong’s ear. 

 

             Jaejoong blinked his eyes, the face did not disappear.

 

            “Are you okay?” the boy asked again, his lips soft and full.

 

            “……”

 

            “Hello? Back to earth?” the voice called again, a hand waved in front of his eyes.

 

            “Ahh, yes yes I’m alright! Hehe, I’m fine!” Jaejoong quickly straightened out his body, his face a shade of pink, “Thank you, thank you for errr… saving me.”

 

            “Not a problem.” The boy walked out of the end door after a tender smile, “be careful now!” the door closed again and slowly the figure disappeared into the blue sky. 

 

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            Not a problem, be careful now…

 

            Jaejoong couldn’t concentrate on his studies; the gentle face kept appearing in his mind.  What a handsome boy… wouldn’t it be great to be his friend?

 

            With his hand holding his chin, Jaejoong stared into the dark night.  Suddenly an idea hit him; he smacked his head angrily and rummaged his bag to take out the purple book. 

 

            Hurriedly he turned to the second page, taking out a pen, he wrote down a few words.

 

            I wish to be his friend and study in the same school. ♥

 

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Preview of chapter 2:

 

“Oh my god!” he yelled and sat up from his bed abruptly.  What was going on? Where was he and more importantly why was he here? He rubbed his eyes again, nothing changed. 

 

A/N: suddenly I want to write something more serious, a story that had a deeper plot, some mystery, some magic and some supernatural.  Of course there will be some romance since our Yunjae couple is involved.  I think this story will be a long one and I promise to update every week.  ^__^ if you want to read more of this, let me know.  School is going to start so I won’t stress myself out if no one wants to read.  Anyways, hwaiting everyone! ♥♥♥♥♥

 

 
 
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( 61 comments — Post a new comment )
ceelee86[info]ceelee86 on August 23rd, 2008 07:16 pm (UTC)
wow..
The first chapter was awesome! can't wait to read the second chapter... well, good luck in writing your next chapter.. Hwaiting!:)
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 23rd, 2008 07:27 pm (UTC)
Re: wow..
ahh is it? I'm glad you like it~ ^^

I will update chapter 2 soon~ ♥
Layla: [dbsk] yunho stuff it[info]siri_greene on August 23rd, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)
it seems interesting :D
for some reason i think yunho has the 'love note'
iheartuknow: jae_tears[info]iheartuknow on August 23rd, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
thank you~ ^__^

really? you think so? haha, we will see~ XD
in0cenc3expired[info]in0cenc3expired on August 23rd, 2008 07:53 pm (UTC)
oooo! i've never seen or read death note, but this looks soooo good~!
lol cant wait for the next update!!
xD
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:51 am (UTC)
ahh, thats good~ please allow me to take you onto a new journey then~ ^^

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
(no subject) - [info]in0cenc3expired on August 25th, 2008 12:54 am (UTC)
alex202[info]alex202 on August 23rd, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
wow ^^ So interesting !! I guess Jae will se Yun in his school in the next day :">.Post new chap asap XD.!!
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
thank you! haha, good thinking, cant say you are wrong!

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
meheartyunho[info]meheartyunho on August 23rd, 2008 08:16 pm (UTC)
ahh please continue! It's very good! <33
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
xaznxxangelx[info]xaznxxangelx on August 23rd, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)
ooo i love death note :D
i was like obsessed with it XD
this story is really interesting, i cant wait for the next chapter
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
*high five* I was obsessed with it as well! ^^

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
Jaedon: jaeho otp[info]jaedonluv on August 23rd, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
Woah! the summary caught me^^ *reads*
Jaedon[info]jaedonluv on August 23rd, 2008 08:51 pm (UTC)
hehe I've never watched or even read Death Note but I've definitely heard of it and my friends said it was/is really good. So if Jae's obsessed with it, it means it's really really good^^ hehe.

Woah that's so cool! If I had the chance, I'd want to have Wish Note so that I could wish that Yunjae would come live with me and stay in my bedroom for all eternity =X Hmm.. I'm guessing Yun's the one who caught him. After all, who else could it be?^^ Hmm and Yun probably also has the Love Note. I wonder what he'll write in it..

Alright then, you want to know? Well I'm letting you know, I want to read more!! ^________^♥ But don't let it stress you, okay? <33
(no subject) - [info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:53 am (UTC)
♫さくらんぼと苺(72)♫[info]kittykitt129 on August 23rd, 2008 09:39 pm (UTC)
It's cute!
(It's pretty easy to imagine a younger YunJae when you've stalked so many itvxq pictures!)
Well written, the storyline's pretty cute.
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:54 am (UTC)
^__^ I love cutie yunjae~ *thinks of chibis yunjae* *drools*

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
anazianblonde[info]anazianblonde on August 23rd, 2008 10:52 pm (UTC)
hahaha, omg, you didnt.

i loved deathnote! but for why, idk. i mean i read a few chapts in the book and sawa few eps of the anime. never really got a hold of the whole story buti still loved it! XD

well, it'll be nice to read more of this (if i ever find a the time) but i wont hate you if you dont. i know how busy skool can be DX
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
ohhh yes i did... lol

lol, I loved it for its complicated plots (sometimes too complicated) and its hot characters... oh Light.. lol

I will do my best~ thanks~ ♥
asuka2507[info]asuka2507 on August 23rd, 2008 11:04 pm (UTC)
oh baby~ haha i remember u went u mention this plot last tym... gonna go read later... busy week.. got lots of test haha XP
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
yes yes~ ^^

ahh please come back when you have time~ ^^
(no subject) - [info]asuka2507 on August 26th, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
[Land Min's UFO's Here][info]toma_love on August 24th, 2008 12:32 am (UTC)
i never read death note although its in one of my to do list things... and you should say that there might be some deathnote spoilers... i didn't know L would die ;__;
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
I apologize for that... T___T its... mian...
adoralula[info]adoralula on August 24th, 2008 01:07 am (UTC)
I like it so much.^^

I guess Love Note's owner would be Yunho.
Is that right? HaHa

Waiting for the next chap ne.

Hwaiting!!

iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
^__^ I'm glad!

you think so? keke, we will see...

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
l4ur42008[info]l4ur42008 on August 24th, 2008 01:48 am (UTC)
wow..this is great! i never thought something like wish note..haha..
hmm...jae as a fanboy..so possessive, ne?*lol*
i love death note too,well, maybe not the same amount as jae..but i like it..and when tvxq in it, i'll love it more...^^
please continue??
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
ahh, great~ glad you like it!
haha, a fanboy already? :p

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
conference8: lovejae[info]conference8 on August 24th, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
i started to like this story....its sound so interesting...i'll wait for chapter 2
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
kattan69[info]kattan69 on August 24th, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
Alright...I'm sold to this story...refreshing plot. Can't wait to see what happens next...one thing for certain, I know that Yunho is holding the other book.
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:57 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
susgirl[info]susgirl on August 24th, 2008 04:04 am (UTC)
awwws, i love it, i love love love it XDXDXD
the first part of Jaechun was hilarious ^^ how random Jae was.
I feel like this wish note is more powerful than the Death note and moreover u dont have to kill anyone in other to grant a wish. But the secret of the wish note hasnt revealed yet so im looking forward to knowing more about it.

Good job sis <3 u r awesome. Plz update everyweek :) luv ya!
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:58 am (UTC)
whheeeeeeeeee *huggles sis* ^^
lol, I think Jae could do it well... hit yoochun and torture him i mean... cough..

it could be but jae had to learn how to control it first... opps... i never said anything~ ^^

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
My music is my life~♥: JaeHo_Bonjour[info]blinkable on August 24th, 2008 04:21 am (UTC)
*woot* I wana read coz I love Death Note to death? xD coz I find Jae cute here and I shall wait patiently for Jae to wish and write into the note that he wants Yunnie~ *tralalalalala hopping off* 8D
HWAITING for school then ^^
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:58 am (UTC)
good! just dont die... hahahaha

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥

and hwaiting for you too! XDDD
pynic[info]pynic on August 24th, 2008 07:39 am (UTC)
That bus scene reminds me of Banjun drama ahaha...
and i do believe Yunho has the Love Note ahaha...or maybe the rival of love? o.o
will wait for next update! AJa Aja!!!
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
you are right... it does... wheeeee!!! lol
you think so? ^__^ we will see..

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
a_suet[info]a_suet on August 24th, 2008 08:27 am (UTC)
yes, yes, ans yes, I do want to read more.
"Death note" has two siblings, never thought of ^__^, but it sounds interesting.
Waiting for your second chap!!!
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
great, I'm glad you like it~

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
ime_e[info]ime08 on August 24th, 2008 09:16 am (UTC)
owhh jae n his 'death note'~ lol cute^^ but poor yoochun though XD
hope the 'wish note' works to grant jae's 1st wish XDD
update soon~
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
hahaha... i loved that part... where yoochun was tortured and all... cough... i love chun really... >.>

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
Respon[info]jaeholife on August 24th, 2008 09:55 am (UTC)
this is interesting , will waiting for the next chapter. :)
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
hana_cho[info]hana_cho on August 24th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
A wish note and a love note that sounds good

can't wait to read more
plz update soon
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
great~ glad you liked it~

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
yue[info]yue_yue on August 24th, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
YAY! finally you started the story!
love the idea can't wait for more!
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
ara_niey[info]ara_niey on August 24th, 2008 02:38 pm (UTC)
*gasp*
wow~
thank god the story line is different!keke~

please do continue~^_____________^
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
^__^

thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥
채리: jaetongue[info]cherryhatescake on August 24th, 2008 03:54 pm (UTC)
ahh handsome boy jung yunho, see you at the next chapter! <3
iheartuknow[info]iheartuknow on August 25th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
thanks, will update soon, very soon in fact! ♥